Miyoshi
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 | | Subject: Sai, Kagami Mon Apr 06, 2015 6:44 pm | |
| General Information File Regular- Zenith Mode:
Name: Kagami Sai
D.O.B.: April 29th, 2019 - 16
Height: 5 Feet 7 Inches
Weight: 143 pounds
Natural hair color: Dark blue- Black
Eye color: Purplish Blue
Mailing Address: 22 W Rodeo Drive Beverly Hills, California, United Stated
Telephone Number: 746-927-4832
Social Security No.: 847-02-1985
Family Average Yearly Income: $534,000
Mother's Name: Kami Utashi (Maiden)
Father's Name: Chitsumi Sai
Siblings Attending the School: None
Brief Description of Gifts: Kagami was born with the gift of Zenith, which is known by many
as "Maximum Level" or "Ultimate Stage." Her Zenith Form gives her a huge boost in speed making her incredibly fast, while her strength increase's twice as much as her regular form. When she is in the midst of battle she prefers to use two daggers chained together as her weapon. Her abilities in Zenith form come from her father having enhanced speed, while her mother had enhanced super strength.
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Sleepy
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| | Subject: Re: Sai, Kagami Wed Apr 08, 2015 5:54 pm | |
| Pending
Please make the appropriate edits before continuing and notify the staff member once it is ready for review.
- Gifts in Beata's universe come through a genetic ESP rather than through enchanted objects (such as her bracelet).
- I take it her gift is just a form of enhanced combat, which is a little too abstract. I'm fine with the concept of a 'Zenith Form', but her gift must be something more specific, such as superhuman qualities, or enhanced reflexes/speed, or enhanced strength, etc. etc.
- The dagger-linked chains are fine so long as they're an actual, physical weapon (not summoned through her gift). Of course, you could have it so her gift is to summon weapons/objects out of thin air or something of that note, but remember characters can't have more than one gift at a time.
- Thank you and sorry for any inconvenience. We should've answered this sooner. | |
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Sleepy
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| | Subject: Re: Sai, Kagami Wed Apr 08, 2015 7:58 pm | |
| Accepted
Congratulations and welcome to Beata. | |
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