Ruzard, Jessica M

Subject: Ruzard, Jessica M Sun May 18, 2014 10:42 pm

General Information File

Ruzard, Jessica M 730323995_772520

Name: Jessica Mize Ruzard

D.O.B.: 09/06/2018 - 15

Height:5'3

Weight:116

Natural hair color: Blonde

Eye color: blue

Mailing Address: 491 Strew Avenue -- 12345

Telephone Number: 555-418-9264

Social Security No.: 1234567890

Family Average Yearly Income: 195,000

Mother's Name:Samantha Greene Ruzard

Father's Name:Dom Blaine Ruzard

Siblings Attending the School: none yet

Brief Description of Gifts: Arachnid Transformation - She can transform into a large human sized spider. In her transformation, she can't control herself. If she turns into an arachnid, and back into a human, she can develop migraines, and stomach pains. At times, she has puked blood.

Subject: Re: Ruzard, Jessica M Mon May 19, 2014 5:08 pm

Pending

Please make the appropriate edits before continuing and notify the staff member once it is ready for review.

Hello! For the most part everything looks to be filled out and going smoothly. However I am not able to approve this creation because of a major detail and a small one because I am very picky.
-First thing is going to be a super easy fix, the DOB needs to be changed as this takes place in the year 2034. This means that if your character was born in 1998, they'd be 35, not 15.
-Second thing, and this is kind of a biggie. Your gift isn't acceptable. Invulnerability, while totally awesome, is not an acceptable gift. It would be WAY too easy for a gift such as this to be taken advantage of and because of that I cannot approve it.

Please look to change these things and if you have any questions just PM me!

Subject: Re: Ruzard, Jessica M Tue May 20, 2014 10:11 pm

mmmm, better?

Subject: Re: Ruzard, Jessica M Tue May 20, 2014 11:21 pm

Accepted

Congratulations and welcome to Beata.

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